Revision comments
The structure is poor, the information makes no sense- for example social work has nothing to do with islamaphobia this is not what I asked this is shocking
Please read the essay for yourself it makes NO sense and is not referenced correctly. This needs to be cities more in text. Has the woes count even been met? This is below poor and need it changing immediately before the deadline
Like said Islam phobia is nothing to do with social work! I said to discuss the way the media has negatively portrayed social work to the public by cases of child neglect such as baby p etc
again islamaphobia and mental health makes no sense this is not what u asked
They need to READ THE ASSIGNMENT BREIF
This is very very frustrating ! I have used your service twice now and been messed around both times !!
The assignment brief has not been followed nor is it distinction level
The structure of the essay is all over the place
The text makes no sense – you did not follow nor understand my instructions.
Islamaphobia, social work and mental health are three separate things you have linked them all together and it makes no sense and is not what I requested
Referencing is very poor and needs to be citied in text
1.1. Analyse the role of media in society
1.2. Analyse the structure of the media in terms of ownership and control
2.1. Critically evaluate at least two models of audience response
3.1. Critically evaluate media representations of at least two different groups
This needs to be followed and structured the same.
Islam phobia is entirely different subject I wanted you to discuss how the media has influenced the public to hate Muslims and the reason why and how etc etc if you cannot do this pick social class – people on benefits , etc
