As outlined in the uploaded assessment brief
“Students are required to pick one topic area (you picked collective violence) and answer one of the following three questions for their essay:”
1. Critically assess the viewpoint that the 21st century is not as violent as the past.
2. Appraise the statement that violence cannot be explained by a single theory by referencing one form of violent behaviour.
3. Evaluate the opportunities and challenges for state agencies in addressing violence.
From reading the essay you produced I could not tell what question you have answered until the very end.
When asked you said you answered question 3 which is in your case:
Critically assess the viewpoint that the 21st century is not as violent as the past.
