This was a failed ESSAY-
rewrite this essay ensuring all the learning outcomes are addressed and the feedback from the tutor is addressed.
address this feedback from the tutor:
“What you have done well You have identified a suitable study and the correct CASP tool to structure your critique.
What you did not so well Your writing style is very confusing with significant sections that do not make sense, the use of incorrect words and repetition of information -see annotations.
The information that you have presented in relation to diabetes is very confusing and in place is factually incorrect. You have not used the CASP tool to structure your assignment or critically analyse the study but have included a significant amount of irrelevant information.
You should not be using the author of the study to support the argument that the process was valid you should be using alternative reference sources to support your argument. Your referencing throughout the assignment is incorrect and your reference list is not presented using the Harvard style of referencing.
How your work can be improved You need to read the assignment brief carefully, research your topic area and ensure you have interpreted the assignment brief correctly. For the resubmission of this piece of work you need to plan your assignment using the steps of the CASP tool addressing each one individually with reference sources to back up your writing.
Once you have critiqued the study and established the findings of the study you then need to apply the study to clinical practice, You need to read the Harvard referencing guide to ensure that all references all cited correctly and you understand the difference between a citation when stating what an author has said and using a reference source to back up a statement you have made.
You need to proofread your work carefully to ensure that all statements makes sense, all spellings are correct and repetitive information is removed. It is also essential during the proofreading process that all factual statements are correctly referenced.”
be critical and break down each section and back it up with evidence and research?
