Rewrite the literature review chapter by adjusting the writing style to make it more engaging . At the moment the draft looks more like a report for example ” this author says this , the other says that” it can be rearranged to read for example ” this study claims that …. and it is supported by these data. On the other hand, other studies have implemented this research by demonstrating that ….. However, some scholars do not agree with this position and claimed that
This is particularly useful to my own work as it shows how ……..
I have attached the literature survey chapter as a separate document but have also attached another document with details on the research proposal to help you understand the context of the literature review chapter.
all referencing is Harvard style.
