Steps toward the formation of a community sport coalition to manage sustainability issues and influence policy
The attached article in Word is incomplete (a situation that has arisen from all the authors being impacted upon by COVID) and needs some rewriting. Not including the Reference list, it is approx. 13,954 words long.
There are several key areas that need to be addressed:
(1) Some significant attention needs to be paid to reducing the document because it needs to be more concise so some areas may need to be shortened/deleted.
(2) You will see comments from the other authors about changes that need to be made throughout the document.
(3) An important area to address is the Results (commencing page 23). Other than needing to be reduced in length (as point 1 above), there are questions over how to report the data (currently in box format).
Having all the boxes at the end of the section would be hard to follow which is why they appear throughout the section. I would like the data to be presented in a better format (particularly when considering what a journal might expect for such qualitative research).
With the changes you make, please may I ask that when you provide the final document, you also provide a separate document that shows all the Track Changes you have made.
Please would you ensure any additions to the citations/references are completed using the APA referencing system and inserted using the EndNote software for automatic formatting. I have provided five additional articles that will be useful to include.
One final point: this needs to be rewritten to a standard that is publishable. Given I have selected ‘Doctoral’ level, I look forward to a high-quality document.
Thank you.
